This poem was written by me on 15|7|2015..
So u can well imagine what my age was, at that time! I was a tot of 11 years .. And in class 6th. Hope you read this poem with the feel that it was written by an 11 yr old kid π .
It's just a 20 SECOND READ! So, u can finish reading this post in just 20 seconds!
So here i go!
THE ENCHANTING RAINBOW π !
An arch of colours
In the sky;
Shining pleasantly
And glowing
With its colours..
Gracefully
Like a peacock
Dancing in the rain;
With its throbbing feathers,
Juddering its wings.
Just have pleasure
Watching the rainbow's
Fascinating colours!
Carefully observe a rainbow
With your closed eyes
And silence...
It'll sing like a winsome linnet;
Tantalizing you...
Pleasantly and calmly
Bidding you goodbye
For the next meet...
With tears in it's eyes!
ANANYA MALHOTRA
15-07-2015
THIS WAS IN REALITY, THE FIRST SENSIBLE POEM I HAD WRITTEN. I NEVER KNEW THE MEANING OF POETRY AT THAT TIME.. STILL, TODAY I FEEL THAT I HAD WRITTEN A GOOD POEM, THOUGH CHILDISH..
It was appreciated by Shipra Ma'am when i had sent it for the school magazine.. She had written "WELL WRITTEN" on the top of it.. Since that day, i got an inner zeal to write poems and so am i doing!
I had UNKNOWINGLY used personification, imagery, metaphor .. at that time, i didnt even know what they meant π
Do write in the comment section, if you could find any of these!
FACT FILE!
MOST OF U MUST NOT BE KNOWING IT! ITS SO AMAZING, INDEED!
A rainbow is not a semi circle.. Its a full circle..
Amazing, right?
So, A very big thanks to all the readers for reading my poem. Plzzz comment so that i can know what you feel about this poem.
Remember: I write blogs just bcz of the inspiration and encouragement you all give me.. So plzz guide me abt how should i improve!
Thank you ππ
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Very nice poem. One cannot tell that this fantastic piece of poetry is written by a 11 year old child. Even if u didn't know the meaning of those literary devices still they r used at the perfect places in a perfect sense. It's just fabulous and awesome poem. Keep up the good work. This poem really nailed itππππ❤π§‘
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ReplyDeleteAwsmm poem... really beautiful..π
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ReplyDeleteAmazing Ananya.. difficult to predict that it's been written by an 11 yr old child for extensive use of literary devices in it...keep going��
ReplyDeleteVery nice poem...keep it up π✌π»
ReplyDeleteVery beautiful indeed...I am not amazed at the fact that it has been written by an eleven years old because if you have a poetic heart and soul, no words and age matter, the feelings come from within you. I love the words used in the poem, they fit so perfectly, making me feel the rainbow!
ReplyDeleteSimilie-like a peacock
Personification-It'll sing like a winsome linnet
Imagery- Flooded with imagery!
Absolutely correct, Sargun!
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ReplyDeletesuch a beautiful piece of poetry for an 11 yr old.. amazingππΌππΌππΌ
ReplyDeleteFantabulous poem Ananya didi.Such a bful art of poetry written in just the age of 11yrs.Outstanding...����������������
ReplyDeleteGreat work Ananya .πππππ«π¦π¨π..keep it up...
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Awesome poem didi..... 11 years and this level of vocabulary and poetry..... Cant think of matching.... Wow πππππ
ReplyDeleteGreat poem! beautifully written !keep it up ananya!!!
ReplyDeleteWow Ananya!! ❤️❤️ As always you are amazing..! �� Keep on writing sweetie!! ❤️
ReplyDeleteVery Nice Ananya��❤️��
ReplyDeleteVery nice poetry....as alwayss❣️❣️���� couldn't realise that it was written in 6th standard.....���� waiting for another peice��������
ReplyDeleteAmazing poem... This is such a masterpiece .... How cn a girl of just 11 write this... Can't believe... Carry on I am so so so excited for the next lovely one...❤️πππ
ReplyDeleteThank u neelakshi!
DeleteWah wah NY inspiration became your inspiration
ReplyDeleteYess radhika!
DeleteAnanya now I must say excellently written. Keep it upππππ
ReplyDeleteThank you soooo much, Shipra ma'am! Getting a comment from u makes me feel such a bliss πππ❤❤
DeleteGod!!!!!! This time you nailed it Malhotra. I didn't even know the meaning of these words when I was 11. Excellent expressions,composition and the choice of words is just so amazing. . . .
ReplyDeleteWoahhhh! This poem is beautiful just like youππ
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