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The Enchanting 🌈 Rainbow!

This poem was written by me on 15|7|2015..
So u can well imagine what my age was, at that time! I was a tot of 11 years .. And in class 6th. Hope you read this poem with the feel that it was written by an 11 yr old kid 😊 . 
It's just a 20 SECOND READ! So, u can finish reading this post in just 20 seconds!

So here i go! 

THE ENCHANTING RAINBOW 🌈 !

An arch of colours 
In the sky; 
Shining pleasantly
And glowing 
With its colours.. 

Gracefully
Like a peacock
Dancing in the rain;
With its throbbing feathers, 
Juddering its wings. 

Just have pleasure
Watching the rainbow's 
Fascinating colours! 
Carefully observe a rainbow
With your closed eyes
And silence... 

It'll sing like a winsome linnet;
Tantalizing you... 
Pleasantly and calmly
Bidding you goodbye
For the next meet... 
With tears in it's eyes! 



                       ANANYA MALHOTRA 
                                 15-07-2015

THIS WAS IN REALITY, THE FIRST SENSIBLE POEM I HAD WRITTEN. I NEVER KNEW THE MEANING OF POETRY AT THAT TIME.. STILL, TODAY I FEEL THAT I HAD WRITTEN A GOOD POEM, THOUGH CHILDISH.. 
It was appreciated by Shipra Ma'am when i had sent it for the school magazine..  She had written "WELL WRITTEN" on the top of it.. Since that day, i got an inner zeal to write poems and so am i doing! 

I had UNKNOWINGLY used personification, imagery, metaphor .. at that time, i didnt even know what they meant πŸ˜…
Do write in the comment section, if you could find any of these! 

                     FACT FILE! 

MOST OF U MUST NOT BE KNOWING IT! ITS SO AMAZING, INDEED! 

A rainbow is not a semi circle.. Its a full circle.. 

Amazing, right? 
So, A very big thanks to all the readers for reading my poem. Plzzz comment so that i can know what you feel about this poem. 

Remember: I write blogs just bcz of the inspiration and encouragement you all give me.. So plzz guide me abt how should i improve! 
Thank you πŸ’“πŸ’“
Stay safe 😘😘


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Comments

  1. Very nice poem. One cannot tell that this fantastic piece of poetry is written by a 11 year old child. Even if u didn't know the meaning of those literary devices still they r used at the perfect places in a perfect sense. It's just fabulous and awesome poem. Keep up the good work. This poem really nailed itπŸ˜‡πŸ˜˜πŸ’•πŸ’š❤🧑

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  2. πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸ‘

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  3. Awsmm poem... really beautiful..πŸ’•

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  4. Amazing Ananya.. difficult to predict that it's been written by an 11 yr old child for extensive use of literary devices in it...keep going��

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  5. Very nice poem...keep it up πŸŽ‰✌🏻

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  6. Very beautiful indeed...I am not amazed at the fact that it has been written by an eleven years old because if you have a poetic heart and soul, no words and age matter, the feelings come from within you. I love the words used in the poem, they fit so perfectly, making me feel the rainbow!
    Similie-like a peacock
    Personification-It'll sing like a winsome linnet
    Imagery- Flooded with imagery!

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  7. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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  8. such a beautiful piece of poetry for an 11 yr old.. amazingπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌ

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  9. Fantabulous poem Ananya didi.Such a bful art of poetry written in just the age of 11yrs.Outstanding...����������������

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  10. Great work Ananya .πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ’«πŸ¦„πŸŽ¨πŸŒˆ..keep it up...
    Ya I did find some of d figures of speech

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  11. Awesome poem didi..... 11 years and this level of vocabulary and poetry..... Cant think of matching.... Wow 😎😎😎😎😎

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  12. Great poem! beautifully written !keep it up ananya!!!

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  13. Wow Ananya!! ❤️❤️ As always you are amazing..! �� Keep on writing sweetie!! ❤️

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  14. Very Nice Ananya��❤️��

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  15. Very nice poetry....as alwayss❣️❣️���� couldn't realise that it was written in 6th standard.....���� waiting for another peice��������

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  16. Amazing poem... This is such a masterpiece .... How cn a girl of just 11 write this... Can't believe... Carry on I am so so so excited for the next lovely one...❤️πŸ˜˜πŸ‘πŸ˜‡

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  17. Wah wah NY inspiration became your inspiration

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  18. Ananya now I must say excellently written. Keep it upπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ

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    1. Thank you soooo much, Shipra ma'am! Getting a comment from u makes me feel such a bliss πŸ˜„πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜❤❤

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  19. God!!!!!! This time you nailed it Malhotra. I didn't even know the meaning of these words when I was 11. Excellent expressions,composition and the choice of words is just so amazing. . . .

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  20. Woahhhh! This poem is beautiful just like you😌😍

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